The following examples are applicable to cover letters. Some attention grabbing lines to be used in cover letters are:
- "During your visit to UCSB last fall, I had the pleasure of hearing you address the issue of FuelCO oil rigs off the coast of Santa Barbara''.
- "We acknowledged and discussed my diverse background when I assisted you through the Internet; I enclose my resume for your consideration. "
- "Since you will soon be working on photo sessions for the Spring catalog, I have enclosed my resume and portfolio to show just how ideal my background in photography and design is for your marketing strategies."
- "Juliette Nagy mentioned your company has opened a division of sporting goods and suggested I contact you."
- "Your speech was inspiring, Miss Rogers. Soon I will have completed my master's in physical therapy, just in time for your entry-level openings in the PT ward."
- "Chaim Isenberg of the Grenwich and Co. accounting firm suggested I contact you regarding opportunities in your warehouse division in Champagne."
Why are these opening lines great?
- Some mention names.
- Some connect to a common experience.
- Some reveal in-depth knowledge of the company involved.
- All show the letter writer as a person who cares enough to give time and attention to the presentation made in this self-marketing tool.
Such lines are effective because they help you to establish a connection with the addressee instantly and provides a meaningful context to your e-mails.
Courtesy: http://www.dummies.com
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